The book starts with a great concept, but the pacing feels
much too slow. By the time the characters finally came together, my interest
had faded, and I found myself reading on autopilot, missing moments that should
have mattered. Cute as it was, this story would have been much stronger as a
novella—sweet and fun, but way too stretched out.
The narration wasn’t quite for me. The higher pitch and
frequent upward inflection made it a little distracting at times, and I had to
take a few breaks. That said, others may enjoy the style more than I did.
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